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Lotus in a home garden

Camera:Sony Ericsson W705
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Lotus
Username:akoyavk akoyavk
Uploaded:12 May 2010 - 2:24 PM
Tags:Flowers, Flowers & plants, General, Wildlife / nature
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carmenfuchs
12 May 2010 - 5:09 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

This is really pretty. The colors are beautiful and the light is nice as well. Only improvement needed is in the area of composition. You could square the frame around the blossom but there are a couple of comps that would suit this. Overall, an image worth tweaking. Not bad for a cellphone camera. I've been working with my cellphone camera alot lately. The results can be really interesting. =)

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CathR
CathR e2 Member 7139 forum postsCathR vcard United Kingdom563 Constructive Critique Points
13 May 2010 - 11:41 AM

This is nice Abubacker. The exposure and colours have come out very well. For me this shot is not so much about the flower itself but the contrast in colours between it and the other foliage. Also the contrast in shapes. I think that carmenfuchs is right in that these aspects could be brought out better with a different crop. I have uploaded a mod with my suggestion but I am sure there are lots of other possibilities.

Best wishes

Catherine

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akoyavk
akoyavk e2 Member 6akoyavk vcard India
17 May 2010 - 12:17 PM


Quote: This is really pretty. The colors are beautiful and the light is nice as well. Only improvement needed is in the area of composition. You could square the frame around the blossom but there are a couple of comps that would suit this. Overall, an image worth tweaking. Not bad for a cellphone camera. I've been working with my cellphone camera alot lately. The results can be really interesting. =)

Thanks Carmin thank U very much for encouraging me . I am a beginner only in this field

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