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O.K. guys, downloaded this image for a reason; was taking this photo a number of times and came out with no a differenceSad!!!!!!!! B&W and sharpen, added. Looking for some advice, please!!!!! Ta, AniaWink

Brand:FUJIFILM
Lens:Fujifilm S5700
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:23 Jul 2012 - 8:51 PM
Focal Length:6.3mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/3.5
Shutter Speed:1/50sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:64
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Lovers...
Username:aniamoore aniamoore
Uploaded:31 Jul 2012 - 1:33 PM
Tags:Black & white, Churchyard, Close-up / macro, Faces, Headstone, Stone
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paskinmj
paskinmj  5 United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
31 Jul 2012 - 1:52 PM

Spot on compositon Ania. So well spotted. My only critique would be to lift the brightness on the foreground. Hope this makes sense?
Matt

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peekay2001
31 Jul 2012 - 4:30 PM

why to change it.. its perhaps best this way.. but perhaps you were pulling our legs.
A very interesting abstract.. Cleverly done.

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NDODS
NDODS e2 Member 43436 forum postsNDODS vcard United Kingdom103 Constructive Critique Points
31 Jul 2012 - 5:39 PM

A composition made by the stonemasons hand, and captured so very well, which is well suited to monochrome.

Regards Nathan

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aniamoore
aniamoore  2 United Kingdom
31 Jul 2012 - 7:58 PM


Quote: but perhaps you were pulling our legs.


Not pulling your legs, not pulling your legs, just would like to do well, same as you guysTongueTongueTongueTongueTonguelol!!!!!!!!Cheers, AniaWink

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taggart
taggart e2 Member 1042 forum poststaggart vcard United States12 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 2:47 AM

Works well as a silhouette-- no need to do any more psot processing!

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pamelajean Critique Team 8799 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1613 Constructive Critique Points
1 Aug 2012 - 7:28 PM

I'm not sure what you mean by "was taking this photo a number of times and came out with no a difference", Ania.
So, perhaps you wanted the "lovers" less dark?
Your camera has exposed for the bright sky and has therefore rendered the rest dark. A simple burst of flash would have done the trick.
I am assuming these are not really figures, but that you liked the heart shape and felt you could make it look like two people, and in that you have succeeded. There is lovely texture on the stonework, which is revealed with brightening.
So, my answer is brightening the stonework and importing another sky, which I have done in my modification. In the first, I have just showed you brightening and a bit of extra sharpening. In the second, I gave the lovers a nice sunset to muse over, and in the third I decided to darken them a bit more, which would be more naturally in keeping with a sunset shot.
Pamela.

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1881
1881  2 India
3 Aug 2012 - 4:13 AM

My openion , everywhere OK here.=========




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