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Studio shoot (2 softboxes), Sony Alpha A7S, 55mm Zeiss Lens

Edited in Photoshop to try and give it a slight glow to the skin, split toning / cross process look, grain added, although I'm not sure how visible this will be on here.

See variants for the original if you want to have a go, modifications welcome, thanks.

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony Alpha ILCE-7S
Lens:CARL ZEISS FE 55mm F1.8 ZA
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:22 Jul 2014 - 4:44 PM
Focal Length:55mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.8
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/160sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Manual
Title:Lucy Studio Shoot
Username:joshwa joshwa
Uploaded:24 Jul 2014 - 4:09 PM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Flash / lighting, Portraits / people
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woolybill1
woolybill1 e2 Member 8woolybill1 vcard United Kingdom65 Constructive Critique Points
24 Jul 2014 - 4:33 PM

I'm sure V1 would be ideal for an advertising campaign - it attracted me to open the thumbnail, after all - but I much prefer the natural look of V2. But I'm old enough to be a genuine fogey Blush
Bill

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10933 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2945 Constructive Critique Points
24 Jul 2014 - 4:42 PM

I really like the shot. V2 more for me as Bill says, - though V1 certainly has a place for something high impact.


Loaded 3 mods which for me try to get more natural, though not knowing the lady, its a guess!

I wounder, in the V2 which has you camera raw adjustments attached, - the original is very yellow when I reset your tweaks to zero; did you use a gold reflector or light source?

Lovely pose and shot either way.


Regards



Willie

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dark_lord
dark_lord Critique Team 101491 forum postsdark_lord vcard England140 Constructive Critique Points
24 Jul 2014 - 9:46 PM

The original is a lovely image. V1 is too yellow/orange for me. I think because the top has come to almost match the hair in colour. Something half way would be good - I was going to try a mod, but looking at mods 4 and 5 they look about what I was envisaging.

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saltireblue
saltireblue Site Moderator 44080 forum postssaltireblue vcard Norway26 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jul 2014 - 9:21 AM

The natural tones appeal to me more, J.

Malc

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dudler
dudler Critique Team 11126 forum postsdudler vcard England364 Constructive Critique Points
3 Aug 2014 - 3:05 PM

The colour of V1 makes it hard to love - especially as I've scanned some old slides that turned out that was earlier this week...

V2 makes more of Lucy's lovely eyes.

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England210 Constructive Critique Points
8 Aug 2014 - 9:09 PM

The red toning makes it stand out in the thumbnails but as others have said V2 is the more pleasing image.
Good to play and try things but not sure the choice of red here works
Regards
Richard

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CarolAnnLauderdale
CarolAnnLauderdale e2 Member CarolAnnLauderdale vcard United Kingdom
26 Aug 2014 - 11:29 AM

V2 for me, lovely image. SmileSmileSmile
Carol

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