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A B&W Close Up Portrait Photo of a Madeirian friend of mine.

Take in a home studio with just one large square soft box, which you can see reflected in the eye unfortunately.

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS-1Ds
Lens:Canon EF 85mm f1.2 L II USM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:1 May 2005 - 7:00 PM
Focal Length:85mm
Aperture:f/7.1
Shutter Speed:1/250sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
White Balance:As Shot
Title:Madeirian Girl
Username:AlanBullGuernsey AlanBullGuernsey
Uploaded:24 Oct 2012 - 2:27 PM
Tags:B&w, Model, Portrait, Portraits / people
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10826 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2831 Constructive Critique Points
24 Oct 2012 - 3:50 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like this Alan. With a close shot like this, and the way she is posed, symmetry and level eyes are important. This needs to be rotated a little to get the eyes level.

The lightbox reflection can be sorted out quite easily with cloning the reflection over, and replacing the catch-lights using a white brush.

Dont know if you were going for a high key look, - Ive done a mod that shows more skin detail, with the eyes sorted out, and also a mod with a diffuse glow applied to soften, and appear more high key.



Hope this is helpful,


regards


Willie

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