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Maid of the Forth passing the Forth Railway Bridge.

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The ferry boat Maid of the Forth, passing by the Forth Railway Bridge en route to North Queensferry.

Camera:olympus c8080 Check out Olympus Image Space!
Lens:7.1-35.6mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Maid of the Forth passing the Forth Railway Bridge.
Username:m lester m lester
Uploaded:18 Oct 2007 - 10:14 PM
Tags:Architecture, Bridge, Ferry, Firth .river, Forth.scotland, Landscape / travel, North, Queensferry, Railway, South, Transport
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AndyM
AndyM  999 forum posts
18 Oct 2007 - 10:37 PM

A few thoughts-

1. Move the camera up - the bridge is more interesting than the water, even if it is covered in tarpaulin.

2. The boat is too small in the frame. I realise that the Forth Bridge is a massive thing, but to me, if the picture is about the bridge and the boat, then the boat has to feature more. A vertical crop, in the middle of the image would help, possibly.

3. I'd prefer to see the boat coming towards me, rather than going away.

Hope this helps!

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