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Thank you for your comments and feedback on yesterdays image, I'd be grateful if you could let me know what you think about this one.

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Tracey

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 400D
Lens:55.0-250.0 mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:10 Jul 2011 - 9:34 AM
Focal Length:55mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:800
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Maisha
Username:Tracey_McGovern Tracey_McGovern
Uploaded:29 May 2013 - 7:01 PM
Tags:Africa, Mono, Portrait/people, Portraits / people, Travel
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Sooty_1
Sooty_1 Critique Team 41207 forum posts United Kingdom198 Constructive Critique Points
29 May 2013 - 11:56 PM

Again a competent portrait. This seems a little flatter in tone than your last one, and the eyes have very distracting reflections in them - possibly partly to do with making the child look up at you, rather than getting down to their level and reflecting a large chunk of sky. She also seems to be looking over the top of the camera, which lessens the engagement with the viewer

I might push the tonal range a little, and probably selectively work on the eyes to add some depth and engagement.

Children are usually very willing to pose, and often have a naive interest in strangers - it seems you have found a few to capture.

Nick

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Mypictures1963
14 Sep 2013 - 3:06 AM

What a great photo of this cute child.Very nice.

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ddolfelin e2 Member 234 forum postsddolfelin vcard Wales1 Constructive Critique Points
14 Sep 2014 - 9:26 AM

I've been asking for more portraits and you've been tucked away doing wonderful work.
Just looked through your portfolio and will make a note to watch out for more!
This is excellent.

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