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Brand:Panasonic
Camera:Panasonic Lumix G5
Lens:LUMIX G VARIO 45-200/F4.0-5.6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:3 Aug 2013 - 7:42 PM
Focal Length:45mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.0
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/60sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:160
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:On, Fired
White Balance:Manual
Title:Maisie
Username:sparrowhawk sparrowhawk
Uploaded:27 Aug 2013 - 10:06 AM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Portraits / people
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Hermanus
Hermanus  2 South Africa
27 Aug 2013 - 10:12 AM

This is a lovely portrait of this beautiful young lady Steve !! I like the blue hue here !

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EAS
EAS e2 Member 5EAS vcard Scotland13 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 10:14 AM

Not 100% smitten by the blue tones but it is a beautiful portrait of one very attractive young lady.

Ann

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philhomer
philhomer  434 forum posts England32 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 10:48 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

the blue does detract (possibly incorrect white balance?) as does the red item (extinguisher? door?) top right. as you were already as wide as you could go Aperture-wise i think stepping back and using a longer-focal length would have helped to also 'diff' the patterned carpet a little.

Compositionally i think a little more space 'in fonrt' would have been better as would perhaps a slightly lower viewpoint ?

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sparrowhawk
sparrowhawk e2 Member 5267 forum postssparrowhawk vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 11:00 AM

thank you Phil for your comment i couldn't change my position as there was a flight of stairs directly behind me and my wheelchair doesn't do stairs ! thank you for the constructive critique tho

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Lillian
Lillian e2 Member 5Lillian vcard United Kingdom16 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 11:15 AM

Great portrait image Steve
maybe a mono tone image would help with the tones...maybe?
Lillian

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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 104009 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 11:34 AM

a beautiful young lady...have had a go at a mod...cloned out the fire extinguisher and altered the tones slightly Smile

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akh
akh e2 Member 101142 forum postsakh vcard United Kingdom5 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 11:39 AM

Lovely shot but I find the blue tones rather distracting, have had a go at doing a modification for your consideration.
Tony

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sparrowhawk
sparrowhawk e2 Member 5267 forum postssparrowhawk vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 11:46 AM

thanks Tony

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EMJAYCEE
EMJAYCEE e2 Member 5EMJAYCEE vcard England10 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 11:50 AM

Much prefer V2 Steve - not keen on the blue tones.
Joan.

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Tish1
Tish1 e2 Member 1Tish1 vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 12:00 PM

Beautiful portrait, I particularly like the soft lighting and I quite like the blue hue, it takes it from the ordinary portrait status to something that bit special and makes it stand out.

Tish

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Joline
Joline e2 Member 8Joline vcard United States51 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 12:13 PM

A beautiful portrait, although v2 is my choice. Although I sometime use the blue tone, I don't think it works well for this young lady. She is much too pretty to be blueSmile

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sparrowhawk
sparrowhawk e2 Member 5267 forum postssparrowhawk vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 12:20 PM

i agree somehow the incandescent lighting i chose to use switched to tungsten thats why its got a blue tinge i believe

Last Modified By sparrowhawk at 27 Aug 2013 - 12:21 PM

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richmowil
richmowil e2 Member 5241 forum postsrichmowil vcard England1 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 12:33 PM

Nice portrait of a beautiful young lady,, Steve!! ( blue tones, no!!!!)

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leontari
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27 Aug 2013 - 2:41 PM

A lovely portrait and definitely I prefer the mono version.
Effrossini

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CarolG
CarolG e2 Member 7128 forum postsCarolG vcard Greece16 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 3:20 PM

A beautiful portrait, Steve. Carol

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Lillian
Lillian e2 Member 5Lillian vcard United Kingdom16 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 4:40 PM

Wow Steve, the mono version is so beautiful
well done to you
Lillian

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Maiwand
Maiwand e2 Member 7Maiwand vcard England69 Constructive Critique Points
27 Aug 2013 - 7:18 PM

Congrats to both you and your lovely young model Steve. You seem to have attracted enough helpful comments so I will leave it at that.GrinGrinGrinGrin
Ron

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Lynniesefforts
Lynniesefforts e2 Member 3Lynniesefforts vcard Australia
28 Aug 2013 - 1:33 AM

Beautifully taken Steve...and such a beautiful model also GrinGrin

Lynette GrinGrin

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Glostopcat
Glostopcat e2 Member 8232 forum postsGlostopcat vcard England2 Constructive Critique Points
28 Aug 2013 - 10:18 PM

A beautiful portrait Steve, the mono version works best

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senn
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30 Aug 2013 - 6:17 PM

beautiful face .. well taken Steve; .. V2 is my preferred one

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