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Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:man at work 11
Username:youmightlikethis youmightlikethis
Uploaded:18 May 2011 - 8:56 PM
Tags:General, Portraits / people
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NEWMANP
NEWMANP e2 Member 61581 forum postsNEWMANP vcard United Kingdom572 Constructive Critique Points
18 May 2011 - 10:49 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

hi,

this type of activity is always good for a picture and the hands in this are fabulous but im overpowered by the top of the mans head. particularly as the hair is so sharp.

there is some great detail in there but for me the real image here is in the working hands. id have shot those with the super textures in the skin contrasting with the carving in the wood.

as its presented the head is too tightly cropped into the corner and is facing at an awkward angle to add any real interest.

it is a good attempt, but i think there was potential for other angles where the head was less dominant and more focus placed on the hands

best regards
Phil

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom825 Constructive Critique Points
20 May 2011 - 9:57 PM

V1 is much better than your other versions, but now we have a fence. You need to crop tighter to remove the fence - really doesn't matter that the head is then part cropped top left. What have you done to v2 - the detail in the hands is great, the black area, I assume to hide something really does not work.

paul

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youmightlikethis e2 Member 11987 forum postsyoumightlikethis vcard Scotland
24 May 2011 - 8:21 AM

thanks

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