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Another B&W from me. This from a small restaurant in Barcelona. Great place with lots of interesting people. Any feedback would be great. Whats working, whats not working.

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Brand:Nikon CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D300 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:50.0 mm f/1.4
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:11 Jun 2011 - 10:51 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/1.4
Aperture:f/1.4
Shutter Speed:1/160sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:800
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:Man with glasses
Username:JE JE
Uploaded:2 Jul 2011 - 9:16 PM
Tags:Black & white, General, Portraits / people
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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
3 Jul 2011 - 8:12 AM

There is the basis of a very strong image here, but, for me, it needs a lot of work. See my mod - crop, darken, burn in and sharpen.

Paul

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cats_123 e2 Member 104023 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
3 Jul 2011 - 11:26 AM

super candid...like the mod, but the original has a nice grainy feel whcih also works...there's a section above the left hand head which I find slightly distracting, and yes, a crop at the top wouldn't go amiss. Smile

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