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Hi all,

I saw this box of mangosteens during Chinese New Year on my visit to my grandparents' house and I thought they looked photogenic. Here I attempted a macro shot which places focus on the mangosteen closest to the camera. The focus is then gradually faded throughout the rest of the frame.

Brand:Ricoh
Camera:Ricoh Caplio GX200
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Date Taken:23 Jan 2012 - 5:18 PM
Focal Length:15.3mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.4
Aperture:f/6.3
Shutter Speed:1/6sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:mangosteens
Username:whlui whlui
Uploaded:30 Jan 2012 - 12:07 PM
Tags:Flowers & plants, General
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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.
JackAllTog
JackAllTog e2 Member 53627 forum postsJackAllTog vcard United Kingdom58 Constructive Critique Points
30 Jan 2012 - 3:17 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

True then eye is drawn into to the shot with this technique, very well done for a compact and its limited DOF.
However for critique, i'd suggest that there is nothing your eye is being drawn in towards, and that the beauty of any one individual fruit is not there to be seen. perhaps next time lift one up to make it stand above the others so it can be seen as well.
Stuart

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