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here is the colored version of taaj mahal, now team give the critiques...

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony Cyber-shot DSC-WX100
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:2 Jan 2014 - 3:14 AM
Focal Length:18.6mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.4
Aperture:f/11.0
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:mark of love
Username:shashank4567 shashank4567
Uploaded:6 Mar 2014 - 11:37 AM
Tags:Architecture
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peekay2001
6 Mar 2014 - 3:40 PM

i like the colors in this.. a crop too tight.. eating some part of the pillars too..

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paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom880 Constructive Critique Points
6 Mar 2014 - 5:41 PM

The crop is a bit tight and the dome a touch over exposed. A strong image but one that would benefit from varied lighting or weather because we see exactly this shot so mant times.

In my area it is the west front of Lincoln Cathedral or the Humber bridge. Shot so may times it is difficult to be a bit different.

Paul

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pablophotographer

It is the same shot but in colour now. My comments remain the same as previously

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alansnap
alansnap e2 Member 10529 forum postsalansnap vcard United Kingdom23 Constructive Critique Points
7 Mar 2014 - 12:47 PM

Yes, I agree with the others. The crop is too tight, so the building doesn't have any scale or position in its environment. The temptation is always to shoot square on to the building, but, unless there's a foreground lead in such as the one you get from within the complex, there is no apparent depth. You seem to have a white balance problem. I know that the Taj Mahal isn't white, but is a wonderful set of pale colours. I took a shot form the gardens across the Jamuna and you can see it here. Have a look at that and see how it differs.
Alan

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