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Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S3 Pro
Lens:sigma 70mm
Title:Maxims Casino Southend
Username:MarkT19 MarkT19
Uploaded:12 Aug 2009 - 10:41 PM
Tags:Architecture, General, Landscape / travel
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FatBoyfocus
FatBoyfocus e2 Member 569 forum postsFatBoyfocus vcard United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
13 Aug 2009 - 7:51 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi

A good effort me thinks. You handled the lighting and reflections well.
The horizon is a bit wonky and I would have tried to correct that and also, the cars are cut in half. Trying to capture them completely might have helped but, then again there is quite a lot going on in your image. A difficult one I think.
The plant on the left is cut and I would have tried to crop it out or repostion when taken and maybe capture more of the walk path on the right as it is a bit of a distraction as is.
Hope it helps Smile

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somnathchatterjee
13 Aug 2009 - 11:05 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

riaanuys has given you good feedback. the image is very much attracting, sharp. but first work with the horizon it is not level. from the title and description of the image i can say that you have tried to show us the casino and its entrance. the inclusion of the river gives us an idea about the location of the casino. you could have either avoided the cars or included them completely. if you were not able to include the complete view of the casino, you could have excluded some part of the image at the left side to include at least the complete view of the casino at the right side. you have also given a blue cast in this image it is looking good but the river and the sky at the back ground is looking unnatural.

Hope it helps,
somnath

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