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this is me on my friends birthday going out to the pub!

Camera:SANYO
Lens:3x super zoom
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Me
Username:mckena07 mckena07
Uploaded:25 Feb 2008 - 12:08 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Digital art, Mwah, Nude / glamour
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Coleslaw
Coleslaw e2 Member 913403 forum postsColeslaw vcard Wales28 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2008 - 12:48 PM

Is that a reflection or something?
The framing is way off. Maybe fill a bit more of the frame with your friend rather than the painting at the back.

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francisg
francisg  10703 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2008 - 1:34 PM

A shame about that catchlight/flare. The subject would be improved if it filled the frame by cropping the top 2/3rds.

Frank

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ade_mcfade
ade_mcfade e2 Member 1015119 forum postsade_mcfade vcard England216 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2008 - 3:39 PM

you look good in the shot Smile

but the shot itself could be improved a lot...

you're sat down with your legs out to one side, so best to do a landscape version of this so you can see them better.

Next, the shot wants to be taken from a lot lower than this - we're better off seeing the carpet and settee with you in the middle/top area than having all that room at the top.

Next - beware of refelctive things when you're using the flash. Whar you've got here is a bounce back of the flash which can work, but here it dominates.

main thing is to get you filling the frame more, we can see more wall than you - and you're far more attractive than the wall !

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graceland
graceland  102378 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2008 - 3:42 PM

one mod

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graceland
graceland  102378 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
25 Feb 2008 - 5:26 PM

ok a couple of mods for u any good ??

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