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wolf1

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27 Feb 2010 - 5:11 PM

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You have at least your injector pump missing!! Unusual picture.
Andy

DRicherby

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27 Feb 2010 - 5:55 PM

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*laugh*

Aside from an injector pump, I think this shot is just missing a natural point of focus — something for the eye to rest on. It's maybe a touch dark, too, but you have some great tones on the dirty metal and nice depth of field.

NEWMANP (Critique Team)

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27 Feb 2010 - 9:10 PM

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hi,
its an interesting subject that needs a little interest pumped into it to give some life to an otherwise dull and drab bit of an engine. worse still there are some seriously distracting highlights near the top. it does have some interesting shapes and features though/

i had a play with a mod, made a duplicate copy and added a "find glowing edges" and then blended the modified copy back into the original. might have worked even better with some toning, have a play and see what you can achieve in 5 mins playing with the filter tools. i kind of like the finished version, hope you do

regards,
Phil