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A fleeting visit.


I'm experimenting with a few things at the moment, trying new workflows, with a particular project in mind.

this is a completerly different workflow for mono's for me. Not bothered about votes just honest feedback. I won't say what I've done & why until the feedback is in so as not to influence you.

Brand:NIKON
Camera:Nikon D700 Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Media City
Username:Nick_w Nick_w
Uploaded:1 Sep 2011 - 7:28 PM
Tags:Black & white, Landscape / travel, Media city, Salford, Toned
Votes:16

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cassiecat
cassiecat  639 forum posts England46 Constructive Critique Points
1 Sep 2011 - 7:32 PM

like the gritty fg in comparison with the smoothness of the rest of the image.lesley

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Daisymaye
Daisymaye e2 Member 6Daisymaye vcard Canada9 Constructive Critique Points
1 Sep 2011 - 7:33 PM

Superb mono image.............Sandy

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DavidTravis
1 Sep 2011 - 7:40 PM

Very good

David

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mrswoolybill
mrswoolybill Critique Team 7440 forum postsmrswoolybill vcard United Kingdom1028 Constructive Critique Points
1 Sep 2011 - 7:41 PM

I'll be interested to hear workflow details - this has an almost eerie coldness.
Moira

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franken
franken e2 Member 123143 forum postsfranken vcard Wales4 Constructive Critique Points
1 Sep 2011 - 8:28 PM

Superb mono!

Ken

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Richsr
Richsr e2 Member 790 forum postsRichsr vcard England209 Constructive Critique Points
1 Sep 2011 - 8:55 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

To be honest I am not use where this work yet Nick, to me the foreground with its strong texture and details almost looks to be part of a different image and I find me eye draw to it and away from the rest of the image.
Also for me the area around the sticking up part of the two smaller rings need to be darkened as it seem to be slightly brighter than the rest of that area
The sky and the details in the building work well Nick.
Hope this is of use
Regards Richard

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Nick_w
Nick_w e2 Member 73886 forum postsNick_w vcard England99 Constructive Critique Points
1 Sep 2011 - 9:07 PM

Thanks Rich, I appreciate that.

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LesF
LesF e2 Member 7176 forum postsLesF vcard 8 Constructive Critique Points
1 Sep 2011 - 9:08 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

For me Nick you already do very decent monos, well excellent monos already, can't really see this as an improvement, more as step back if you get what I mean.
Richard has pretty well summed up the image, the sky also appears to me to be seperate from the rest of the image, as the cloud movement does not extend into the reflections of the water, the toning of the image is fine.
You have a project in mind, so may be what your intending here fits into that, if so go for it but for me your normal style mono's already work well enough.


LesF

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