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Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 30D
Lens:70-200mm
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:15 Feb 2011 - 1:44 PM
Focal Length:145mm
Aperture:f/4.0
Shutter Speed:1/400sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Memetik buak karsen
Username:yoesoef yoesoef
Uploaded:16 Feb 2011 - 8:17 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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Philo
Philo e2 Member 351 forum postsPhilo vcard England83 Constructive Critique Points
16 Feb 2011 - 7:00 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

With a few tweaks this is a delightful shot of a gorgeous little girl. You have caught the moment well with a great expression and I just love the hat. The girl is a little central so a crop to the right places her on a third whilst leaving room on the left for her to look into. The blown sky doesn't bother me but it has left the girl looking under exposed so a bit of flash would have helped here.
In my mod I addressed this with a curves adjustment and I do hope you see this as an improvement.
Phil

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lianna
lianna  4 United Kingdom13 Constructive Critique Points
17 Feb 2011 - 3:54 PM

I think everything has been said above. My main comment was going to be the centralised position, to put here more to a side would improve it!!!

A lovely capture though Smile x x

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