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Bored of rainy days and was messing about with my camera this appeared !

Brand:Panasonic
Camera:Panasonic Lumix DMC-FZ48
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:22 Jun 2012 - 7:11 PM
Focal Length:4.5mm
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/400sec
ISO:1600
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Messin about
Username:widtink widtink
Uploaded:15 Jul 2012 - 2:00 PM
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ams99
ams99 (Junior Member)
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65 forum posts England9 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jul 2012 - 10:33 PM
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Very intriguing image. I like the lighting.

I would try to reduce the highlight reflection on the box to balance out the overall context.

Good image

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widtink
16 Jul 2012 - 8:42 AM
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cheers yup i see what you mean that would probably improve the image unfortunately i dont have any software yet so will have to wait but thanks again, to be honest it was a bit of a fluke lol as iam new to all this !
Rod

paulbroad
16 Jul 2012 - 10:05 AM
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I'm afraid i'm struggling to tell what the subject is. Is it an ashtray. That' the problem for me.

Paul

TanyaH
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233 forum posts United Kingdom12 Constructive Critique Points
16 Jul 2012 - 2:43 PM
0

Hey Roddy. Okay, I've ruined my eyes but I've figured out what it is (large dish on a coffe table, with some books on the left hand side) ... Smile Anyway, although you've said it's a fluke and you've not yet got any software to play with, I really like the stark angles of this as it currently is. I know you've indicated that mods are welcome, so I've uploaded my take on it. I adjusted the Levels a bit to bring out some detail in the rest of the room, and cropped it to more of a square format as I think that suits the abstract nature better, and also gets rid of some unwanted clutter in the rest of the room. I added a 'grain' filter effect (like in the good ol' days of fast film!) to try and hide some of the bits I couldn't do anything with (like that highlight reflection on the book/box) and the radiator and curtains at the top of the image. Good luck when you do get some software ... your family won't see you for days! Smile

TanyaH
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233 forum posts United Kingdom12 Constructive Critique Points
16 Jul 2012 - 2:55 PM
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Actually, having uploaded the mod ... I now don't like it Sad It looks different to what it did on my screen, which may have something to do with the fact that I needed to upsize it slightly to fit with the uploading regs. The grain now looks golf-ball sized! I've just done another one which, although along the same lines (without the grain, but with the large highlight burned in a bit) I think looks better than the last dodgy effort.

widtink
17 Jul 2012 - 2:33 PM
0

thanks everyone for the comments and the mods (starting to get the lingo lol) one of the reasons i liked the image was that it is quite hard to work out and that it sort of floats if you understand.Tanyah that was the effect i chose in camera so obv grain on grain disnae work 2nd effort much better.
Rod

TanyaH
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233 forum posts United Kingdom12 Constructive Critique Points
17 Jul 2012 - 3:04 PM
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Ah, thanks for clarifying Rod. I obviously got the wrong end of the stick when you said it was a 'fluke' ... Grin I still like the graphic quality of your image, if only for the intrigue value!

widtink
18 Jul 2012 - 8:53 AM
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Yup Tanya thats exactly the term i was looking for its more graphic than photographic i know technically its probably crap but i just like it and i suppose thats all that matters eh ? It was still a fluke though !!.Thanks for the cooments
Rod

ErictheViking
ErictheViking (Critique Team)
106 forum postsErictheViking vcard Scotland73 Constructive Critique Points
5 Nov 2012 - 9:36 PM
1

Hi Rod Just found this shot while looking through your portfolio. I really like this shot it reminds me of some of the early still lifes from the 1930's. I know you said you were just playin around but its a good effect.

Eric

widtink
5 Nov 2012 - 10:06 PM
0

Aye Eric it was one of my first decent pictures wi the bridge camera , bit o a fluke but i wis quite proud of it , cheers ma man

Rod

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