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I'm a new member and totally new to photography so here's my first upload

Camera:Nikon D90 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-105MM
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Milky
Username:jim28bob jim28bob
Uploaded:28 Aug 2010 - 8:17 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro
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wisp
wisp  4 United Kingdom
28 Aug 2010 - 8:32 PM

slightly underexposed would look alot better if it was pristine white but other than that great capture

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Pieter_Kotzee
28 Aug 2010 - 10:12 PM

Excellent capture.

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Jestertheclown
28 Aug 2010 - 11:17 PM

Hi James and welcome to Epz.

Good to see you uploading to the critique gallery. You'll get plenty of good, honest advice in here.

This is pretty good for a first attempt. It's reasonably well focused and you've certainly caught the action.
It's a bit dark, possibly underexposed slightly and the flash is reflected on the milk.
My only other niggle is that it's cropped very tightly across the top.
Hope this helps.

Bren.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom850 Constructive Critique Points
29 Aug 2010 - 7:58 AM

Well done as an exercise. Needs just a little more room above and a boost the brightness and contrast - I assume it's milk, and it needs to be brighter.

Paul

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