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My attempt to show montserrat with its old buildingd and modern roads on stilts.

Brand:Sony
Camera:Sony A33
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:13 Sep 2012 - 1:32 PM
Focal Length:10mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/7.1
Shutter Speed:1/160sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Montserrat
Username:eremitenj eremitenj
Uploaded:17 Oct 2013 - 7:19 PM
Tags:Amazing, Architecture, Monastery, Mountain, Rail, Road, Special, Stilts
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10979 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2981 Constructive Critique Points
17 Oct 2013 - 9:08 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Its a nice tourist shot of the famous monastery. I could see this in a travel magazine.

My eye is drawn immediately to the featureless white cloud in the upper middle, - I would suggest removing it.

The 10mm lens has of course introduced some distortions, and they can be corrected is you like to. Ive done so in the mod, and also dealt with the sky in the modification.

Scroll up, click the modifications tab, and view large.


Enjoy the site,


Regards



Willie

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paulbroad
paulbroad  789 forum posts United Kingdom879 Constructive Critique Points
18 Oct 2013 - 8:12 AM

Yes, it's that cloud! A very nice record image with good composition, but that cloud is a killer. It would clone out.

Paul

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8829 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1638 Constructive Critique Points
18 Oct 2013 - 4:27 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hello, Norman, and welcome to EPZ.

I have to agree, that white cloud was the first thing that caught my eye, so I class it as a distraction from your image. There wasn't anything you could do about it at the time of shooting, but it can easily be removed afterwards.

You have filled the frame with interest and used the roads as lines to lead the viewer's eye through the scene. Lines are not only a good way to lead the eye into and through an image, but they can also help emphasize points of interest, and give an image more depth.
Your viewpoint is excellent and gives the scene quite a dynamic perspective.

Pamela.

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