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not sure what to do on this but thought I would put this on for starters and go from there, all thoughts and vbiews are welcomed

Camera:fujifim finepix120J
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Mordiford loop walk
Username:foreverawhite foreverawhite
Uploaded:21 Jun 2010 - 8:08 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel
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torres99
torres99  5119 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jun 2010 - 8:14 PM

Very nice first image, welcome to the site.

Regards

Carl

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newfocus
newfocus  7644 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
21 Jun 2010 - 11:42 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Welcome to epz Neil - I'm sure you'll enjoy it.

I'm going out on a limb here in that by reading your intro, you seem up for some feedback and I appreciate that myself so...

I think the comp and the square crop have a lot going for them. The group of cows bottom left ads balance, the tree has some interest in it and the position of the curve of the hills works well.

I think you could maybe colour balance the shot a little warmer to remove some of the blue cast and apply some curves adjustment to help cut through the background haze by increasing contrast in the trees on the hill. Using a grad filter to retain some more detail in the sky or shooting two exposures and merging them would help too.

I don't mean any of this as negative though - just views and observations of the kind that I appreciated when I was starting and the important thing's to keep enjoying it.

cheers, John

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RoxyMoo
RoxyMoo  3 England
22 Jun 2010 - 8:15 AM

Great first picture Neil. Well done x

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foreverawhite
22 Jun 2010 - 6:57 PM

thanks for the feedback, what you have said means nothing to me, but that is only because that I am on a steep learning curve and any advice and tips would be welcomed and used I'm sure. so please keep up the feedback to put me on the right tracks to becoming the next David Bailey.
Cheers Neil

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