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Photo taken at the same place of my previous uploads. Acting as Moses in the Holy-week held in Malta.

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D3000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:6 Apr 2012 - 5:42 PM
Focal Length:195mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.8
Aperture:f/4.8
Shutter Speed:1/500sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:900
Exposure Mode:Not Defined
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Moses
Username:dusfim dusfim
Uploaded:12 Nov 2012 - 8:37 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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Briwooly
Briwooly  8452 forum posts England5 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2012 - 8:45 PM

A real nice job of this one Mario

Brian........................

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2800 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2012 - 9:30 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like this a lot better than the previous uploads Mario. The skin tone is better, much less "muddy", eyes are great, and background filling is good.

The face is a little underexposed, - my only suggestion, and Ive loaded a mod a little brighter.

I wont even mentions composition, but heres an interesting read on the subject for you and anyone dropping in: http://www.dpreview.com/articles/1304360703/breaking-the-rules



Regards



Willie

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strokebloke
12 Nov 2012 - 10:13 PM

Whatever may or may not be good or bad about this it fulfills the primary objective.
It catches your eye. It makes you look twice. I makes you want to get closer to really look at it.
That makes it a very good photograph.

Like Willie, I like it more than your previous upload. Well done

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2800 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2012 - 11:04 PM

Hi Jack, - missed seeing you on the site, - hope alls well.

W

Last Modified By banehawi at 12 Nov 2012 - 11:04 PM

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alistairfarrugia Critique Team 1164 forum posts Malta88 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2012 - 11:21 PM

The only thing I don't like about this is what seems to be rough editing at the top of the image - where there's the black fur or whatever that is. Was there something there that you edited out? Otherwise I love this! Well done.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom843 Constructive Critique Points
13 Nov 2012 - 11:02 AM

Nice image. I would crop down to the top of his hat and just brighten a touch.

Paul

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Joline
Joline e2 Member 8Joline vcard United States51 Constructive Critique Points
13 Nov 2012 - 1:48 PM

This is so well done, much better portrait than the previous in my eye. I like the find rugged lines of his face, and the way he is looking into the distance.

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moiral
moiral e2 Member 4moiral vcard Scotland
13 Nov 2012 - 5:24 PM

I really like the eyes on this chap. Moira

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dusfim
dusfim  4 Malta
13 Nov 2012 - 5:26 PM

Thanks to all for your comments and constructive critique.

Willie, yes I agree after seeing your upload that the face was a little bit underexposed.

Alistair, I left the fur as it was to leave it natural as it was. Thanks again to you all.

dusfim

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