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please friends expecting your criticism..............Smile Expecting Criticism except for those logos please.. ... i was about to post the picture with only one logo of mine....it was unfortunate.....hope u all understand......Smile
Thank u all
Madhu......SmileSmileSmile

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D3100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikor 18-55mm VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:21 Apr 2012 - 7:16 PM
Focal Length:122mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/4.8
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/320sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:No Flash
White Balance:Auto
Title:Most of us fail to realise the Good things when it is around us...and looking far...
Username:madhoosphotography madhoosphotography
Uploaded:23 Nov 2012 - 3:35 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10933 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2945 Constructive Critique Points
23 Nov 2012 - 9:01 PM

Needs feet. Im trying for the worlds shortest critique!


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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 4Irishkate vcard United Kingdom74 Constructive Critique Points
23 Nov 2012 - 10:19 PM

Something I've done too often too, cutting off parts of feet.
I'd probably clone out the other person on the right also.
Then we'd have a lovely candid image of the young couple.
KateGrinGrinGrin

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Sooty_1
Sooty_1 Critique Team 41227 forum posts United Kingdom202 Constructive Critique Points
24 Nov 2012 - 1:01 AM

As above, plus, I'm not sure about the colour balance. It looks like it was taken with a Hipstamatic app, and I can't guess what the background is. I'm afraid I'm spending more time looking at it than I am the couple. I'd try and get rid of that intruding posterior too.

Nick

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8806 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1636 Constructive Critique Points
24 Nov 2012 - 12:17 PM

I always feel that when you have a picture of someone taking a photograph, it's good to see what that person is shooting, and so I would have liked to see more of the sunset on the left of the image, taking the viewer's eye in the direction of the camera. However, I realise there is someone standing to the left of the man, and it wasn't possible to avoid him. The couple are your subject, but a bit tight in the frame, and the feet have been mentioned already.
Pamela.

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Sooty_1
Sooty_1 Critique Team 41227 forum posts United Kingdom202 Constructive Critique Points
24 Nov 2012 - 2:13 PM

It's not a camera, it's a pair of binoculars....Tongue

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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom872 Constructive Critique Points
24 Nov 2012 - 2:27 PM

Decent candid, but you need either more or less. Get the feet in or frame much tighter on the tops of the bodies. Not sure colour looks natural?

Paul

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8806 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1636 Constructive Critique Points
25 Nov 2012 - 9:12 PM

Oops, silly me......definitely binoculars.

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