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What attracked me at first is the scene where there are houses under the mountain, but i never there at right condition. Until a few days ago, i see the clouds in front of the mount where amaze me.

I'm not so sure if the composition work, i tried find something to become ass a lead but never found it. i process to b&w using channel mixer r:20 g:40 b:40. I choose this, base on this http://www.prime-junta.net/pont/How_to/100_Curves_and_Films/_Curves_and_films.html . But because i think the result look flat to me, i change the brightness etc,, until i found the result that satisfied.

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S2950HD
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:24 Nov 2012 - 3:24 PM
Focal Length:17.1mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.1
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/500sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Average
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Mount Ciremai Behind The Clouds
Username:arhab arhab
Uploaded:1 Dec 2012 - 6:21 AM
Tags:Black & white, Landscape / travel
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10777 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2782 Constructive Critique Points
1 Dec 2012 - 3:37 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

That link doesnt work for me Muhammad.

Theres a lot of digital noise in this that looks off. It across the whole image, but there are also vertical lines through the image which can be seen if sharpness is increased that suggest something went wrong along the way in processing, as these are issue that have been introduced in processing.

Load you original as a modification so we can see what you started with?

Ive loaded a mod, but is quite soft after using noise reduction software on it.

Ive cropped some space from the to and right.


regards


Willie

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
1 Dec 2012 - 5:59 PM

You are right Willie, i added texture effect, now i know it's bad. Sorry, i didn't check the link again, wrong place when paste. this is the link article and upload the original on mod. Thanks for the mod, I see your point, cropping the top side.

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paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
1 Dec 2012 - 9:09 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I am a great beleiver in keeping away from all these wonderful effect filters. They rarely add anything and usually detract from quality. There is a good image in there but you look to be rather under exposed and I would have stayed with colour.

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