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the idea is to have the monument infront of the landscape the concentration is mainly on the singer

Camera:Nikon D60 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:18-55mm
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Music & Landscape
Username:Hage Hage
Uploaded:3 Sep 2010 - 9:39 AM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Music
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acousticmist
3 Sep 2010 - 9:58 AM

A strange image, but different. Well done......Martin

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cats_123 e2 Member 104254 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland25 Constructive Critique Points
3 Sep 2010 - 10:07 AM

not sure the bra stool quite works?..the `monument' on it's own would work well perhaps?

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devlin e2 Member 4651 forum postsdevlin vcard India39 Constructive Critique Points
3 Sep 2010 - 11:06 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Joseph,

I think i understand what you were attempting to do here, but i feel compositionally the image is a bit off, the monument is too close to the RHS corner with a lot of space at the LHS, maybe if you were to place the monument on a thirds itersect it might convey the idea better. I also agree with Jeff that maybe the monument on its own would work as well. One other thing; the legs of the stand have got cut off at the bottom which sorts of detracts from the shot from a symmetry perspective.

Cheers and hope you find this useful

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