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Just like the way it was looking at me

Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Title:My best side
Username:Charlesmoss Charlesmoss
Uploaded:10 May 2009 - 10:06 PM
Tags:Wildlife / nature
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andylea
andylea  637 forum posts United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
10 May 2009 - 10:14 PM

wonderful capture
andy

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dark_lord
dark_lord Critique Team 101507 forum postsdark_lord vcard England145 Constructive Critique Points
10 May 2009 - 10:34 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

It's a nice angle on the bird, especially as it has it's head turned sideways. The grass in the foreground would make a nice frame except for the fact it obscures parts of the bird, importantly part of it's beak. It would mean a lot of fiddly cloning and healing work to change this. You can't direct these creatures unfortunately Smile

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morpheus1955
morpheus1955 e2 Member 8morpheus1955 vcard United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
11 May 2009 - 1:39 AM

Superb image.

Hugh

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photophantom
photophantom e2 Member 6108 forum postsphotophantom vcard Philippines3 Constructive Critique Points
11 May 2009 - 2:12 AM

excellent swan portrait

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Patricia Fenn
Patricia Fenn e2 Member 10614 forum postsPatricia Fenn vcard United Kingdom56 Constructive Critique Points
11 May 2009 - 6:16 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Really beautiful image, I like the way he is peeping over the grass, looks kind of shySmile
You did well to not burn out any feather detail, and the eye catch light and water droplets just make the shot for me.

I cloned out the top of the grass where it went over the beak and to the eye, and dodged the water droplets and eye to give a bit more sparkle.

Super image!

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Charlesmoss
Charlesmoss e2 Member 5Charlesmoss vcard England14 Constructive Critique Points
11 May 2009 - 9:53 AM

Thank You all for your time on this one and especially Patricia
For the mod I see what you mean about the grass
Have a good week everyone
Regards Charles

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focused-photography e2 Member 10259 forum postsfocused-photography vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
15 May 2009 - 8:12 AM

Nice one.

Carsten

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