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My first Model shoot!!

Brand:NIKON
Camera:Nikon Coolpix P80 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Superzoom
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:4 Feb 2012 - 10:25 PM
Focal Length:9.8mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/3.5
Shutter Speed:1/18sec
Exposure Comp:-1.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:My First Model Photoshoot
Username:OisinPhotography OisinPhotography
Uploaded:12 Feb 2012 - 11:29 AM
Tags:General, Portraits / people
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cats_123
cats_123 e2 Member 103956 forum postscats_123 vcard Northern Ireland24 Constructive Critique Points
12 Feb 2012 - 1:38 PM

very brave...am sure someone will come along to give you some advice...my (non expert) first thoughts are that you have some shadows which better lighting might solve. Smile

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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 74167 forum postsKarenFB vcard England159 Constructive Critique Points
12 Feb 2012 - 4:28 PM

A very good portrait for your first attempt! I like the fact you've found yourself a plain background - if your model had stood a little away from it then you could have a) avoided shadows and b) thrown the background out of focus slightly. Your model is beautifully relaxed and is standing in a natural pose - practise will make perfect! Smile

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OisinPhotography
OisinPhotography Junior Member 3 England
12 Feb 2012 - 4:40 PM

Thanks for all your advice and Karen My Aperture Was On 8.0f And I forgot to Lower it to 2.8f thanks anywaySmile

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jamestheboy
12 Feb 2012 - 9:09 PM

Great looking photo well done







james Smile

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