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This is my first ever attempt at portrait,my daughter modelling for me.....Smile

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm Finepix HS10
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:12 May 2011 - 12:56 PM
Focal Length:102.3mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/2.8
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/38sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Portrait
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:My lovely daughter..........
Username:michelle30 michelle30
Uploaded:12 Nov 2011 - 7:01 AM
Tags:Portraits / people
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accipiter
accipiter e2 Member 4accipiter vcard England57 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2011 - 7:10 AM

She is lovely and you have captured an excellent thoughtful expression. On my screen the skin tones are a bit pale and the soft focus very much in evidence. I think I would warm up the skin tones a bit and adjust or retake this pose with better focus eg hair and clothes, and only soften the face a little in your software. A

Last Modified By accipiter at 12 Nov 2011 - 7:12 AM

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CarolG
CarolG e2 Member 7128 forum postsCarolG vcard Greece16 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2011 - 7:25 AM

A wonderful portrait of a very beutiful young lady, Michelle. Carol

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WhiteRose1
WhiteRose1 e2 Member 41028 forum postsWhiteRose1 vcard England133 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2011 - 7:40 AM

She has a natural beauty. A great pose but agree with Arthur about the sharpness.

Dave

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brianwakeling
brianwakeling e2 Member 7brianwakeling vcard United Kingdom
12 Nov 2011 - 10:34 AM

Good atmospheric shot - it shows you don't always need eye contact - Brian

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2797 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2011 - 3:02 PM

Its a good effort Michelle. The pouse is very nice. You dont tell the difference between V1 and V2, but as far as I can see, V1 is softer than V2.


I think that you have overdone the softness effect in both, - dont know how youve appli8ed it, - lets us know. You should not soften eyes or lips when doing this, - leave the sharp.

She can be composed a little more to the right, off centre, and with some colour to add some warmth to her skin tones, and a judicious combination of softening and sharpening she can look better, - mod loaded.


Regards


Willie

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Niknut
Niknut e2 Member 4519 forum postsNiknut vcard United Kingdom60 Constructive Critique Points
12 Nov 2011 - 5:05 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Stunning portrait, of a stunning girl !!!!......great 'pose', & beautifully photographed.....I think the very slight 'softness' in V1 only adds to her 'femininity'....love it !

I've done a fairly simple mod. for your consideration.........just added a 'glow' to the whole image !!....it's diffused the B/G a bit more, but more importantly it's
added even more 'femininity' (not that she needs it !), & created a nice 'aura' to the whole shot !......finally added a thin black border to hold everything together !!

Hope you like it ??.....regards....Keith.

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DilysT
DilysT e2 Member 3DilysT vcard United Kingdom
29 Nov 2011 - 6:01 PM

Lovely photo... and some great advice above from other members... I'm learning from all this - thanks!


Dilys

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