my walk in Henley

banehawi (Critique Team)

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6 Dec 2012 - 9:26 PM

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I like the idea. You have done some blurring thats not quite believeable, - there are objects in the same plane where some are blurred, some are sharp, - so it more of a surrealistic shot, and quite attractive.

The square format I think can be improved on, and by stretching the shot vertically, and narrowing the width, with some space cropped from the bottom first, I suggest an alternate presentation that seems to me to be better balanced.

I have uploaded two version of this, - the second less saturated, to show what I mean.

Its a nice mood youve created, - not for everyone, but I like it.


regards


Willie

paulbroad

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8 Dec 2012 - 8:10 PM

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Very good from a phone. Interesting indeed,but not sure. The effect is a bit strange and unexpected in terms of sharpness and blur. Willies mod looks good. Applaud the different approach.

Paul