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Still focus. It took a few shots for me to achieve my perfect dark eery pic as you can see here . Smile

Camera:Apple iPhone 4
Lens:I phone
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:my walk in Henley
Username:Skyline320 Skyline320
Uploaded:6 Dec 2012 - 6:36 PM
Tags:Flowers & plants, Landscape / travel, Wildlife / nature
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10867 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2862 Constructive Critique Points
6 Dec 2012 - 9:26 PM

I like the idea. You have done some blurring thats not quite believeable, - there are objects in the same plane where some are blurred, some are sharp, - so it more of a surrealistic shot, and quite attractive.

The square format I think can be improved on, and by stretching the shot vertically, and narrowing the width, with some space cropped from the bottom first, I suggest an alternate presentation that seems to me to be better balanced.

I have uploaded two version of this, - the second less saturated, to show what I mean.

Its a nice mood youve created, - not for everyone, but I like it.


regards


Willie

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Skyline320
7 Dec 2012 - 4:39 PM

Thanks so much looks aceGrin

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom851 Constructive Critique Points
8 Dec 2012 - 8:10 PM

Very good from a phone. Interesting indeed,but not sure. The effect is a bit strange and unexpected in terms of sharpness and blur. Willies mod looks good. Applaud the different approach.

Paul

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