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Shot from last nights studio meet.
Hope everyone enjoyed themselves and a big thank you to Danny and leander
Steve

Title:NirrorMirror
Username:SKavanagh SKavanagh
Uploaded:23 Jan 2009 - 11:57 AM
Camera:Eos 1D mk111
Lens:Sigma 24-70 f2.8
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Tags:Elemental studios, Flash / lighting, Portraits / people
Votes:26
Group Event:Another Studio Meet
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kay_pink
23 Jan 2009 - 12:33 PM
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Nice composition, great work

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StuartAt
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23 Jan 2009 - 12:34 PM
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I like the idea, but a couple of things bother me. The light on the model feels a little too harsh making me want to look at the model (who is out of focus) rather than her reflection (which is in focus). I also think that the LHS could do with a crop, as those elements distract from the main subject.

DannyLenihan
23 Jan 2009 - 12:42 PM
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Cracking shot Steve. Have to agree with Stuart about the LHS. I'd also think about cloning out the winding peg for the chicken vents that you can see in the mirror! The reason the light on the model seems harsh, as i said last night, is that the mirror will undoubtedly take two stops out of the reflected light, so whilst the subject in the mirror is well lit, the actual subject unreflected is blown out by to stops. A little selective "burning" would fix this.

Good crack again last night. Well organised Sir...

Danny

Jamfu
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33 forum posts United Kingdom
23 Jan 2009 - 12:55 PM
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Great shot steve, another great night.....cheers mate!!

James

SKavanagh
23 Jan 2009 - 12:57 PM
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Have made the alterations Stuart and Danny have made let me know what you think
Cheers

StuartAt
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23 Jan 2009 - 1:08 PM
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Much better Steve (the alterations).

Richsr
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23 Jan 2009 - 1:33 PM
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Was going to comment on the crop and blown lighting but Danny has given good advice IMO.
Regards Richard.

razer
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60 forum posts United Kingdom
23 Jan 2009 - 1:46 PM
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Love the 1st one,shame i missed this shot but will be up for the next one .
Ray

franken
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23 Jan 2009 - 6:22 PM
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Excellent work!

Ken

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