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My granddaughters first attempt at photography, literally her first shot with an DSLR so any critique would be valued as she wants to make photography her life's work

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 600D
Lens:18.0 - 55.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 28.3 - 86.5 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:29 Jun 2014 - 4:53 AM
Focal Length:47mm
Aperture:f/9.0
Shutter Speed:1/200sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:On, Fired
White Balance:Auto
Title:No cup this year
Username:Lelah Lelah
Uploaded:1 Jul 2014 - 7:46 PM
Tags:Black & white, Sports / action
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Pollyjc
Pollyjc e2 Member Pollyjc vcard England
1 Jul 2014 - 8:08 PM

Fab image, a great journal & emotive shot! Keep it up. Smile

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DicksPics
DicksPics e2 Member 3DicksPics vcard United Kingdom8 Constructive Critique Points
1 Jul 2014 - 9:01 PM

A superb image, Lelah!
It's so good to see youngster's having a go at this 'photography lark'!
12 out of 10 for this shot!SmileSmileSmile

Richard

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Lelah
Lelah e2 Member 2Lelah vcard United Kingdom
1 Jul 2014 - 9:39 PM

Thanks to you both for your comments, they will really encourage herGrin

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dudler
dudler Critique Team 11163 forum postsdudler vcard England389 Constructive Critique Points
1 Jul 2014 - 11:50 PM

To be sure of getting the full works, it is worth posting in the Critique Gallery - guaranteed the attention of several thoughtful people.

And maybe she will sign up as a junior member in her own right?

It's a fine shot, expressive and well-titled.

Exposure and focus are both sound, and monochrome works for the subject.

Ideally, have the whole foot in shot: just cutting off an edge can seem careless.

And the real learning will come when she switches from program mode and auto white balance...

This is a great start, and I look forward to seeing more of her work - either here on yoru pages, or in her own right.

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Lelah
Lelah e2 Member 2Lelah vcard United Kingdom
2 Jul 2014 - 9:34 PM

Dudler I really appreciate the comments, and I know Ali will, she is so full of the desire to learn about photography it is lovely to see.

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