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Taken for a Hen party, at the weekend, one of the better ones that showed some off the fun they were having,

Camera:Nikon D2X Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:70/200, f2.8
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Off Road
Username:isibs isibs
Uploaded:24 Mar 2009 - 2:13 PM
Tags:General, Sports / action, Transport
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madbilly
madbilly  6 England4 Constructive Critique Points
24 Mar 2009 - 2:16 PM

good image

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motorsportpictures
24 Mar 2009 - 2:27 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Well timed and a good use of shutter speed to get the wheels and sense of movement right. but th crop is a tad bit to tight just leave a little more infront to show were its going and would look better if you could see more of the wheels at the bottom and more grass.

Hope that helps.
Scott

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conrad
conrad  1010877 forum posts116 Constructive Critique Points
24 Mar 2009 - 2:29 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Well, for the purpose I think you've done rather well - I suppose the driver must be happy with this shot. Good lighting, good exposure, composition works (with some extra space on the left).

But if you ever want to make more of this kind of shot, you could try one or more of the following:

- Use a smaller aperture to blur the background.
- Give the quad a little more space, especially below the wheels.
- Pan the shot, keeping the subject in focus, but blurring the background.

Hope this gives you some ideas.

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nickhawk
nickhawk  8 United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
24 Mar 2009 - 4:47 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Agree with previous comments - I think the crop is too tight. SInce you've got most of the quadbike in the frame, it looks a bit silly that a small area is cropped. Also would have benfitted from smaller depth of field with trees more blurred.

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