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Oh! I look at you & the calmness prevails...

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The man has come to the river side, finally. He appreciates & acknowledges the nature & its supremacy.
Lovely sight!

Camera:Sony Cyber-shot DSC-W110
Lens:Carl Zeiss
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Oh! I look at you & the calmness prevails...
Username:eliteankit eliteankit
Uploaded:28 May 2010 - 9:35 PM
Tags:Abstract, Calm, Landscape / travel, Man, Mountain, People, Portraits / people, River, Romantic, Serene, Side, Specialist / abstract, Think
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PauloNascimentoPhotography

Very nice shot!
Paulo

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Carabosse
Carabosse e2 Member 1139547 forum postsCarabosse vcard England269 Constructive Critique Points
29 May 2010 - 1:56 AM

This certainly has a pensive feel to it although one can't help noticing you have cut off his feet! Wink

The photo looks a bit washed out. In the mod I've uploaded for you I've increased contrast by means of levels and curves adjustments. Hope that helps.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  782 forum posts United Kingdom875 Constructive Critique Points
29 May 2010 - 8:11 AM

Potentially very nice, but you needed to point the camera down a bit - cut off the sky and include his feet. The auto exposure may then also have performed better - you are about one stop over exposed.

Paul

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eliteankit
29 May 2010 - 11:59 AM

Nicely done by u, Focus Man!

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Tooth
Tooth  95772 forum posts Ireland227 Constructive Critique Points
30 May 2010 - 1:20 AM

I yhink the concept behind this is good but it was taken in very boring and harsh light conditions. The mods above can rescue this to some extanet, but there's no substitute for good natural light at the time of exposure.

Others have touched on compositional faults; one that seems to have been missed but screams at me is that the water line cuts across his face. A change of position should have been used to place his head either totally above or below the water line

Stephen

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