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I taken this photo near my work site, itís almost like a abandoned shed temporarily made for Carpentry work two or three years ago Ö

Camera:Nokia N73
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:Old Carpentry workshop
Username:smith2009 smith2009
Uploaded:2 Apr 2009 - 10:34 AM
Tags:General
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smith2009
smith2009  5 India
2 Apr 2009 - 10:37 AM

Please comments.......

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riprap007
riprap007  101568 forum posts England37 Constructive Critique Points
2 Apr 2009 - 10:45 AM

rubble and confusion with recycled doors and breeze blocks, the title hints at the context, but that is not discernible from the image.

The mobile did a reasonable job, for a mobile, if you've got any software it may be worth tweaking the curves/levels a bit.

I think if you had a series of shots perhaps to place this building more in context, or/and added some of that information into the description then it may be more readily appreciated.

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smith2009
smith2009  5 India
2 Apr 2009 - 10:57 AM

Hi Nicholas...........

Thanks for your comments..really i will considrer it

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8769 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1598 Constructive Critique Points
2 Apr 2009 - 1:44 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I feel there is a lot of potential within this old carpentry workshop. In this image, there is no real focal point, something to catch the eye, it just seems to be a jumble of bits and pieces. I really feel you could find one or two interesting items for a good composition, still portraying the workshop theme.

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smith2009
smith2009  5 India
2 Apr 2009 - 2:21 PM

Hi pamela........

You said it correctly about problem of the image ď there is no particular interesting objectď Thanks for your good advice and spending time to see my picture

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Sahyadri
Sahyadri  661 forum posts India2 Constructive Critique Points
2 Apr 2009 - 10:04 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

over exposed is what i feel.
what pamela says does make sense. in all the chaos, an order to guide the eye makes a good picture. the most striking thing in thsi is the worn out plywood board that seem to have a great texture and tone....

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smith2009
smith2009  5 India
5 Apr 2009 - 4:53 AM

Hi Dear Sahyadri .......

Thanks for your Comment , ( yes its bit over exposed )

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Snaphappyannie

Have read previous comments - but I must congratulate you on taking the shot - and with a mobile! Wow! Someone far cleverer than me said "take it or lose it" - so good for you to take it. I'm sure you will make use of the other comments next time!

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smith2009
smith2009  5 India
6 Apr 2009 - 4:55 AM

Hi Ann

Thanks , for your inspirative comment..........

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tuhin
tuhin  8
7 Apr 2009 - 12:25 PM

Nice one.

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smith2009
smith2009  5 India
7 Apr 2009 - 1:06 PM

Thank u Tuhin

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