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"LOVE IS JUST A WORD UNTIL U FIND SOMEONE WHO GIVES IT THE DEFINITION"..............This was shot during my cousin's marriage..i was trying to convey the joy and proud of the bride when she is near her man.................My dear Professionals..... Hope u all like it and as usual expecting any kind of criticism which is related to improvise the shot for future reference ...........SmileSmileSmile
MADHUSmileSmileSmile

Brand:NIKON CORPORATION
Camera:Nikon D3100 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikor 55-200mm VR
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:12 Feb 2012 - 12:19 AM
Focal Length:160mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.3
Aperture:f/6.3
Shutter Speed:1/100sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:200
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Spot
Flash:On, Return detected
White Balance:Auto
Title:On HER day..............:)
Username:madhoosphotography madhoosphotography
Uploaded:19 Nov 2012 - 1:57 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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debu
debu  4 India
19 Nov 2012 - 2:11 PM

It seems to me If the background was of a different colour, then the contrast would have been better.
debu

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2795 Constructive Critique Points
19 Nov 2012 - 3:12 PM

This is a lovely shot, and a terrific moment youve captured.

I think the bride is a little too sharp, - just slightly softer may look better, and you could tone down the brightness of the grooms collar.


Ive loaded a mod with this done, and the background slightly darker.

Its a fine shot as it is though, Im sure they love it.


regards


Willie

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom842 Constructive Critique Points
19 Nov 2012 - 7:35 PM

I agree the grooms collar is a tiny bit bright but otherwise I rather like this. I like sharpness and prefer it here. Soft is difficult to do properly and the best way is a diffuser when the image is shot which retains the sharp image but allows highlights to bleed into shadows insinuating a soft glow.

Paul

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Irishkate
Irishkate e2 Member 3Irishkate vcard United Kingdom73 Constructive Critique Points
19 Nov 2012 - 10:07 PM

A lovely image of the bride and groom - I like the sharp focus against the soft one of the groom.
I'm learning from the above comments and the different approaches everybody has.
KateGrinGrinGrin

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madhoosphotography

Thank u dear Debu,Willie,Paul and Dear Kate....am happy u all liked it......SmileSmileSmile
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parob
parob e2 Member 3parob vcard France69 Constructive Critique Points
21 Nov 2012 - 2:15 PM

I may be the only one, but I detect a colour cast on the bride's cheek and the bottom half of the flowers. Is it the darn White Balance again? I tried toning down with a slight s-curve, it works! Same thing with the groom's collar. On the other hand, I hesitate doing anything with this shot for fear of destroying the bride's lovely expression. Still, I am curious about the colour cast. Does anyone else see it? Well done Madhu. Paul Smile

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arhab
arhab  243 forum posts Indonesia2 Constructive Critique Points
21 Nov 2012 - 11:33 PM

No, i do not see color cast.

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