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This image was made four years ago while travelling in the State of Jammu & Kashmir in north India.To me the colour of the sky and formation of clouds looked like burst of a volcano.

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Camera:Nikon D80 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikon 18-135mm f/3.5-5.6G ED-IF AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor Lens Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:16 Jun 2008 - 7:24 PM
Focal Length:90mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.7
Aperture:f/5.6
Shutter Speed:1/30sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Not Defined
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:No Flash
Title:On my way
Username:Subhashsapru Subhashsapru
Uploaded:17 Jun 2012 - 11:09 AM
Tags:Clouds, Landscape / travel
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Deep_Bhatia
17 Jun 2012 - 12:39 PM

Yes. You are right Sapru ji. It looks like a Volcano. I have uploaded a modification after lightning the upper mountain a bit by using the doge tool. Deep

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Subhashsapru
17 Jun 2012 - 12:59 PM

Thanks Bhatia ji, now it looks good.

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paulbroad
paulbroad  681 forum posts United Kingdom840 Constructive Critique Points
17 Jun 2012 - 3:54 PM

I think the scene as you saw it was probably rather more impressive than it has translated to the camera. really needed the colours to be stronger and more dramatic for me with a definite focal point.

paul

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apierzchala
17 Jun 2012 - 10:21 PM

Hello,
I would suggest a couple of ideas for when you next come across similar scenes. Try shooting vertical (portrait format) rather than horizontal to make more of the sky. If you use a tripod (and you should…) then it would be good to invest in some neutral graduated filters to even out the exposure between the bright sky and very dark foreground. The latter has lost all detail, which is a pity. I can well understand what attracted you and why you pressed the shutter, but unfortunately to the viewer that wasn’t there with you, the splendour has not come across in the picture. Adam

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Subhashsapru
18 Jun 2012 - 8:45 AM

Thanks Mr Paul and Mr Adam for your observations and suggestions.

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