On the phone

My first attempt to an office style photo ...
Please advise on what's positives, negatives, ways to improve, etc...

I uploaded two versions - color & bw

Went to the bank today with my wife; the advisor went to make us a coffee so took the chance for a quick photo session.

Brand:	Canon
Camera:	Canon EOS 500D
Lens:	17-50mm
Recording media:	JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:	31 Mar 2012 - 1:33 PM
Focal Length:	34mm
Lens Max Aperture:	f/2.7
Aperture:	f/2.8
Shutter Speed:	1/80sec
Exposure Comp:	+1
ISO:	400
Exposure Mode:	Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:	Multi-segment
Flash:	On, Fired

Title:	On the phone
Username:	gonzalito
Uploaded:	1 Apr 2012 - 2:41 AM
Tags:	Busy, Office, Phone, Portraits / people, Working
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Votes:	9
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