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Inspired by the song, 'Pale September' by Fiona Apple. Smile
I attempted an autumn/water theme, I hope the textures don't look clashy and cluttered too much.


Pale september, I wore the time like a dress that year
The autumn days swung soft around me, like cotton on my skin
But as the embers of the summer lost their breath and disappeared
My heart went cold and only hollow rhythms resounded from within
But then he rose, brilliant as the moon in full
And sank in the burrows of my keep

And all my armour falling down, in a pile at my feet
And my winter giving way to warm, as Im singing him to sleep

He goes along just as a water lily
Gentle on the surface of his thoughts his body floats
Unweighted down by passion or intensity
Yet unaware of the depth upon which he coasts
And he finds a home in me
For what misfortune sows, he knows my touch will reap

And all my armour failing down, in a pile at my feet
And my winter giving way to warm, as Im singing him to sleep
All my armour falling down, in a pile at my feet
And my winter giving way to warm, as Im singing him to sleep

Title:Pale September
Username:Asilwen Asilwen
Uploaded:11 Feb 2007 - 12:10 AM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Nude / glamour, Portraits / people
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mattberry
mattberry e2 Member 10259 forum postsmattberry vcard England14 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2007 - 12:13 AM

I like it, eyecatching and colourful, and enchanting eyes too!

Regards
Matt

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mikesavage
mikesavage  12234 forum posts England2 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2007 - 1:17 AM

Yes, very nice indeed. Click!

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ArtRat
ArtRat  7 United Kingdom
11 Feb 2007 - 7:03 AM

Another super image from you. Well done. click

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Imagine23
Imagine23  8241 forum posts United Kingdom
11 Feb 2007 - 9:19 AM

Really like this, deserves more attention.
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glenalva
glenalva e2 Member 8324 forum postsglenalva vcard Scotland
11 Feb 2007 - 9:49 AM

Beautiful work......very striking image.

Ali

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ktcam
ktcam  9457 forum posts Scotland
11 Feb 2007 - 11:31 AM

Beautiful composition in gold and russet. Her eyes are striking. A sensuous pose and an uplifting ambience. Very nice work.
kate

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Chant57
Chant57 e2 Member 8371 forum postsChant57 vcard United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2007 - 5:10 PM

Excellent work, beautiful colour, striking image.
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chrisco
chrisco  959 forum posts United Kingdom3 Constructive Critique Points
11 Feb 2007 - 7:53 PM

Superb,deserves more recognition!,love it.

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stephenD
stephenD  7
11 Feb 2007 - 11:23 PM

I really like this. It looks like it belongs as a perfume advert or on an album cover. good work

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Atlas
Atlas  11621 forum posts United Kingdom
12 Feb 2007 - 4:40 AM

Beautiful work Britany. Here's your second Readers Choice award ☼☼☼☼☼

Rob

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Asilwen
Asilwen  7 Canada
12 Feb 2007 - 4:42 AM

aww thank you! Smile I think I have two readers choice awards now, this one, and one on 'Aqueous Transmission' :] Thank you everyone!

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Atlas
Atlas  11621 forum posts United Kingdom
12 Feb 2007 - 4:43 AM

Lol I just edited but you were too quick Smile

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PaulY
PaulY  7
12 Feb 2007 - 5:04 AM

Stunning in its composition and color.
Paul

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riffusraffus
13 Feb 2007 - 4:05 AM

marvellous shot

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Duncan_E
Duncan_E  7199 forum posts United Kingdom2 Constructive Critique Points
13 Feb 2007 - 2:19 PM

Totally fantastic, from expression, lighting, composition, colours and content. Genius.

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