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She is Pannee, my new model from the next city. She is very young, but very-very beautiful!
This is her first photoshoot, but not the last! XD
C&C welcome!
| Camera: | Nikon D70S  Check out Nikon Nation! |
| Lens: | Nikon 50mm F:1.8 |
| Recording media: | RAW (digital) |
| Title: | Pannee |
| Username: | 
illuzioo |
| Uploaded: | 2 Sep 2008 - 8:19 AM |
| Tags: | Beauty young, Fashion, Flash / lighting, Nude / glamour, Portraits / people |
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Nice idea but for me it doesn't quite hit the mark.
The face isn't quite sharp enough - that may be from the compression for uploading (you could try sharpening it slightly after compression) but I am not sure.
Also the wee triangle of skin on the left needs cropped as it tends to draw the eye over there.
The models right shoulder is raised a bit too much and it makes it look like her arm comes out of her ear.
It sounds like I am just pulling this shot apart but when you have asked for critique I have to tell it as I see it. However, if this was her first shoot then both of you will be a bit nervous and your next shoot will produce much more relaxed shots
At first sight a fine shot of a lovely girl - but then I see things. Your focal point is obvious, and not the eyes - and the hand on the right becomes very prominent. Despite her obvious beauty and atributes, I would still concentrate on those rather nice eyes.
I would crop much tighter to just below the bust and some off left and right.
paul
I have uploaded a mod with these suggestions, - including everything said by the above, with:
An alternate crop. showing how it would look if you had left more room at the top in the original (I didnt try to fill in a fake hair!). What this does is focus on the eyes and face, - the eyes are on a "thirds" intersection.
Its a suggestion, and hope it helps
Regards
Willie
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