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This is my first go of panorama , i know its not that good thats why im uploading it i want tips on how to do panorama photos better

Brand:FUJIFILM
Camera:Fujifilm FinePix S2950HD
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:6 Sep 2012 - 5:33 PM
Focal Length:5mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.1
Aperture:f/3.1
Shutter Speed:1/12sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:800
Exposure Mode:Landscape
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
White Balance:Auto
Title:Panorama 1st Try
Username:katiejames_2012 katiejames_2012
Uploaded:3 Oct 2012 - 8:54 PM
Tags:Panorama, Portraits / people
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tonyheps
tonyheps  111 Constructive Critique Points
3 Oct 2012 - 9:53 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Hi Katie
Probably this is not a panorama in the traditional sense but more 3 seperate shots joined together. As such you have joined them really well. More importantly is the content which is really original. My only thought on this shot is that the right hand figure is not as sharp as the other 2 and is slightly isolated. The idea is really good and you should definately keep working on the ideas!

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drayl002
drayl002  434 forum posts United Kingdom4 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 5:05 PM

You don't see many shots like this in the Junior Gallery Grin

Yes, I agree with Tony (the right hand figure is too isolated). Great idea and hope too see more of these from you...


Luke

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Niknut
Niknut e2 Member 4515 forum postsNiknut vcard United Kingdom60 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 6:19 PM

Cracking shot !!.....it's certainly different, & works rather well !!!

The only slight flaw is the door doesn't quite blend, particularly at the bottom ?.....If this pan. is made up
from 3 images, try creating the 'join' down the RH side of the door frame, any slight mis-match won't be
seen then....in the same way as the RH blank wall blends together nicely.......

Also try 4 or 5 images to make the pan., they're much easier to blend than fewer shots !!....unlike using film, it
costs nothing to take plenty of digital shots.....then just pick the best in the series to make/blend the pan !!

Hope that helps a little....regards...Keith.

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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84254 forum postsKarenFB vcard England162 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 6:48 PM

Not all images are suited to the panoramic format, but this has provided you with good pratice for knitting shots together seamlessly! You've coped very well with the joining of these three images - it makes an interesting (and different) picture! Smile

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jamestheboy
4 Oct 2012 - 7:44 PM

There is nothing wrong with this one very good choice of background I like the way you have composed it. but there are some areas which can use just a little bit of work it all come with experience . Very well done and keep up the good work







james Smile

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10781 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2795 Constructive Critique Points
4 Oct 2012 - 9:04 PM

Actually it is pretty good.
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Carabosse
Carabosse e2 Member 1139390 forum postsCarabosse vcard England269 Constructive Critique Points
5 Oct 2012 - 12:45 AM

Good stuff - and parctice makes perfect. Well done on presenting something a bit different. Smile

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