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Brand:Hewlett-Packard
Camera:HP Photosmart 318
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:13 Jan 2001 - 5:01 PM
Focal Length:6.8mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/8.0
Aperture:f/80.0
Shutter Speed:1/51sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:100
Metering Mode:Center-weighted average
Flash:No Flash
Title:Paper Sculpture
Username:kesav04 kesav04
Uploaded:18 Mar 2011 - 10:06 AM
Tags:Humour / fun
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Grampy
Grampy  4507 forum posts England71 Constructive Critique Points
18 Mar 2011 - 3:56 PM

I find the shot a bit light and lacking in contrast, as well as it not being straight , I have done a modification changed to match my remarks .
Enjoy epz.
All the best
Phillip

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Jestertheclown
18 Mar 2011 - 10:22 PM

For some reason I quite like this but I have to agree with Grampy here.
The added contrast makes all the difference.

Bren.

Edit: Is anyone else reminded of "The Court of the Crimson King?"
Is anyone else old enough to remember it . . . ! ?

Last Modified By Jestertheclown at 18 Mar 2011 - 10:24 PM

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paulbroad
paulbroad  781 forum posts United Kingdom854 Constructive Critique Points
19 Mar 2011 - 6:58 PM

Yes, a mod needed as said, but very well seen and amusing indeed.

Paul

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pamelajean
pamelajean Critique Team 8769 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1599 Constructive Critique Points
19 Mar 2011 - 8:36 PM

Hello, Kesavaraj, and welcome to EPZ.
This is well taken, and I like the texture of the material behind it. I agree that it is a bit "flat" and that added contrast is needed, but I also feel this could be the foundation for some interesting manipulations. You may not have tried this sort of thing yet, but if and when you have a go, this would be a good image to experiment with. There are people on this site who are masters at manipulation, producing fantasy images with tons of atmosphere. I am not one of them, but I have had a go with some tree bark and offer you my modification. I used the bark as a background, then used it to texture the mask, added a drop shadow and some posterization. I think this could be done more effectively to produce quite a scary image, even though there is a smile on the face.
Pamela.

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