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harold parker state park

Camera:Pentax K-7 Check out PENTAXPORTAL!
Lens:18-55
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:park
Username:lstanfel lstanfel
Uploaded:11 Oct 2010 - 8:41 PM
Tags:Landscape / travel, Trees
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RachelMB
RachelMB  842 forum posts England10 Constructive Critique Points
12 Oct 2010 - 10:25 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

This is a good shot, but I feel that the lovely greens are a bit muted and could benefit from some boosting.

I've done a mod - I upped the saturation (by +35), then did some burn work on the foliage shadows to improve contrast - I like the darkness of the tree trunks against the light of the leaves. I also cropped the right of the photo to cut off what I guess is someone's sleeve, and some of the left of the image to help improve the composition. I think this brings the dappled light on the ground and gives the image more of a strong focus. Smile

Edit: Almost forgot, I also dodged the highlights and burned the midtones and shadows on the path. Smile

Last Modified By RachelMB at 12 Oct 2010 - 10:29 PM

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lstanfel
lstanfel  3
13 Oct 2010 - 2:17 AM

Thank you I appreciate the input and the picture looks much better!

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