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this was taken at sunset and just as the rain was starting to roll in. all comments good and bad are welcome. and feel free to comment on my portfolio. i ahve also put a slight watercolor wash over the photo. it was taken with a coolpix s8000 point and shoot like all my photos are.

Brand:NIKON
Camera:Nikon Coolpix S8000 Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:11 Jun 2010 - 7:23 PM
Focal Length:8.1mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/3.5
Aperture:f/3.8
Shutter Speed:1/1000sec
Exposure Comp:0.120298
ISO:100
Exposure Mode:Program AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:Pendle Hill
Username:kasuga kasuga
Uploaded:9 Aug 2011 - 9:31 AM
Tags:General, Landscape / travel, Pendle hill, Wildlife / nature
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CathR
CathR e2 Member 7139 forum postsCathR vcard United Kingdom563 Constructive Critique Points
9 Aug 2011 - 10:19 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

it's a very pleasant scene with the sun's rays streaming through the clouds. the water colour treatment works well too. what doesn't work so well is the fence, particularly the fence post which is right in the middle of the foreground and draws a lot of attention to itself. Also the smudgy bits - is it wool or something sticking to the fence? I have done a mod for you where I have cloned out the marks as best I could but no doubt spending more time would help. It's relatively easy to do though as the blurriness of the treatment helps. A far better solution would be either to have gone through the gate into the next field to take the shot or if the gate was locked, just lean over it.

best wishes

Catherine

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Stickleman
Stickleman e2 Member 445 forum postsStickleman vcard England3 Constructive Critique Points
9 Aug 2011 - 3:58 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I don't mind the central post so much as the chopped in half gate on the right,if it had been another fence post i think it(the fence) would have added a bit foreground interest, but the chopped gate just draws the eye to the right.Lovely colours though and whilst i'm not a big fan of 'effects' i like this.

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