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For my next GCSE project at school, we were given a choice of topics to choose from including Landscapes, Changes Natural Forms... e.t.c

Out of all seven, I choose stairs/escalators... so coming up are examples of my work for that topic... starting with a lego man going down 'Penny Steps'

Comments will be appreciated! Smile

Title:Penny steps
Username:miss_v miss_v
Uploaded:27 Nov 2010 - 2:17 PM
Tags:Close-up / macro, Photo journalism
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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84277 forum postsKarenFB vcard England163 Constructive Critique Points
27 Nov 2010 - 3:17 PM

A lovely image! I like the colours and the concept. You've focused well on the main subject, with good depth of field.

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woolybill1
woolybill1 e2 Member 7woolybill1 vcard United Kingdom65 Constructive Critique Points
27 Nov 2010 - 4:17 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Good for you, choosing something less traditional than Landscapes Smile
I agree with Karen's points. Perhaps you might consider a crop off the right to de-centre the Lego man: placing your subject off-centre makes for more visual interest, and there isn't anything beyond the last step except plain background.
I hope your GCSE course is going well.
Bill

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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10866 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2862 Constructive Critique Points
27 Nov 2010 - 6:24 PM

The pose of the character is so well done. Youve managed to achieve a very real sens of motion, - excellent.


I would also go with Bills suggestion, - it could add a little more of a dynamic feel to the shot.

regards



Willie

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MrsS
MrsS  84527 forum posts England18 Constructive Critique Points
28 Nov 2010 - 3:57 PM

I really like the concept AND the execution Smile

Fran x

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