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first project with photoshop. an aerial petrol station for military aircraft taken at the RIAT 2007

Camera:Nikon D70 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikkor 18-55 Check out Nikon Nation!
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:petrol station
Username:B00bi72 B00bi72
Uploaded:15 Jul 2007 - 8:18 PM
Tags:Riat, Transport
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CanonMan
CanonMan e2 Member 12489 forum postsCanonMan vcard England4 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jul 2007 - 8:33 PM

Great angle you've got on this to emphasise the size but it's a bit too dark for me so that there's no detail of what you're actually seeing.

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albyn
albyn  8 Scotland
15 Jul 2007 - 8:46 PM

Yes, a little dark for detail but the outline is interesting. A monochrome version might be interesting. I wish I could have been at the show!
Bob T

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BriM
BriM  8
15 Jul 2007 - 8:51 PM

I find it a little cluttered at ground level, esp. on the left. I'd lose the blue in the sky which intrudes on the lovely dark tones.
Good eye for an interesting shot.

Bri.

Last Modified By Dave at 15 Jul 2007 - 8:52 PM

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shaks  12561 forum posts Tokelau1 Constructive Critique Points
15 Jul 2007 - 9:12 PM

Agree that it's a little dark but I do like the composition. Perhaps brighten the plane up a bit and make more use of the clouds by dodging and burning.

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B00bi72  7
15 Jul 2007 - 9:24 PM

thanks for your comments. this is the first time that i've done one of these so am a bit rough but once again thank you.

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guitarman74uk
18 Jul 2007 - 3:03 PM

nice try bro!composition is very good!just needed more practice on photoshop skills...ok ba bord?

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