Join Now
Join ePHOTOzine, the friendliest photography community.
Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more for free!
- View Large
- Vote
Join to Vote
You must join ePHOTOzine to vote. - Comments
-
No Description
| Brand: | Canon |
| Camera: | Canon EOS 650D |
| Lens: | EF50mm f/1.4 USM |
| Recording media: | JPEG (digital) |
| Date Taken: | 10 Jul 2012 - 5:29 PM |
| Focal Length: | 50mm |
| Lens Max Aperture: | f/1.4 |
| Aperture: | f/8.0 |
| Shutter Speed: | 1/125sec |
| Exposure Comp: | 0.0 |
| ISO: | 100 |
| Exposure Mode: | Manual |
| Metering Mode: | Spot |
| Flash: | Off, Did not fire |
| Title: | Photoshoot with Riana |
| Username: | 
pmeswani |
| Uploaded: | 13 Jul 2012 - 9:59 AM |
| Tags: | Modelling, Photoshoot, Portraits / people, Riana, Studio |
| Votes: | 8 |
Comments
I don't know why you have disabled 'Modifiactions' as I wanted to download the pic to see if it was sharp enough, as, at first glance, it certainly doesn't seem to be. It is a nice clean image but for me there is far too much advertising text applied, as what I want to see and to comment on is a photograph, not advertising!
Others know far more than I do about portraiture and I am sure you will hear from them, but for me I would wish to see the model further away from the background, or a larger aperture used to throw it out of focus. The model certainly seems to be very relaxed with you which is excellent. The pose is not akward at all so I presume you got lots of good shots. Without the text and with a crop applied I feel you have a vey good shot.
I look forward to the comments of otehrs.
Frank
Hi Focus_Man,
Thanks for your comment. I chose not to accept modifications as I am not yet comfortable about people taking copies of the picture, and possibly palming it off as their own. The text can easily be removed, and on reflection I should have uploaded a cleaner picture.
With Studio photography, you are constrained with what is available.... Space, Lighting, etc. If this was a location shoot, maybe I would agree with you about moving the model away from the wall, but no such luxary here.
Right.
Having seen your versatile portfolio, (some strong pictures there) I have come back to your most recent pic.
Two not very important but worth taking after things.
Background: If it can be ironed, someone's got a hell of a job.
Colour: I think I would had shot it with black background.
Did you choose white to compliment the underwear? to imply anything about her nonsense? Were you asked to use white?
Pose, model, lighting are fine.
Hi Pablo,
Thanks for your feedback. I was not in control of the background, but I did shoot with the model on 2 backgrounds, one of which was the black, and this was the other.
The shoot was part of a group shoot, so I wasn't in control of the set and clothing.
Thanks for your feedback, it is appreciated.
Add a Comment
ePHOTOzine, the web's friendliest photography community.
Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more.
Related Content
Join Our Free Newsletter
Awards
Current Competitions
Vanguard June 'Landscape' Competition - Win TIPA Awarded Gear!
1st June 2013 - 30th June 2013
This month, Vanguard are giving you the chance to get your hands on TIPA 2013 awarded gear in our 'Landscape' competition.Up for grabs are two ABEO Pro 2...
Featured e2 Photo
June's Photo Month
Check out ePHOTOzine's inspirational photo month calendar! Each day click on a window to unveil new photography tips, treats and techniques.
