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A portrait: the brief was for: playful, flirty, not overtly sexual, warm and friendly

Taken sitting on an upturned sofa with daylight on the right and a reflector on the left

ISO 200 f/4 1/40s 50mm

Camera:Nikon D300 Check out Nikon Nation!
Lens:Nikon 50mm f/1.4
Recording media:RAW (digital)
Title:Playful Girl
Username:Wellspring Wellspring
Uploaded:27 Jan 2009 - 3:27 AM
Tags:Digitally manipulated, Girl, Hair, Portraits / people, Pretty, Red, Woman
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dharker
dharker e2 Member 8dharker vcard United Kingdom1 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jan 2009 - 5:16 AM

Love the tone, and the colours! Very pretty model well photographed!

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glazzaro
glazzaro e2 Member 970 forum postsglazzaro vcard United States23 Constructive Critique Points
27 Jan 2009 - 5:54 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

A very lovely model. I like the shot though I am not sure that so much canvas/bg need to be shown. My only critique is that it seems as if there is not enough light to accent her features. I did a mod to show what a little more lighting in the right place can do for the shot.

Greg

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Wellspring
27 Jan 2009 - 10:37 AM

Thanks for the mod Greg.

The reason for the large bg is for the client to put text on it - I should have mentioned that.

Unless the client requires it otherwise, I personally prefer to keep skin natural looking, but if they wanted perfect skin then I hope I could manage something like yours. I appreciate your detailed description of the method.

After looking long and hard at the differences, I think you are right about the levels, contrast and brightness.

Many thanks for your input and mod
John

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