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I have taken this photo for portrait photography.
This is my first attempt of doing portrait photography..
Do tell my your views Grin Smile Tongue Wink

Brand:Canon
Camera:Canon EOS 5D
Lens:50.0 mm (35 mm equivalent: 48.0 mm)
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:4 Mar 2012 - 12:03 PM
Focal Length:50mm
Aperture:f/3.5
Shutter Speed:1/80sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
ISO:400
Exposure Mode:Manual
Metering Mode:Evaluative
Flash:Off, Did not fire
Title:PORTRAIT..
Username:sailimaye sailimaye
Uploaded:5 Mar 2012 - 2:55 PM
Tags:Portraits / people
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James_C
James_C  536 forum posts United Kingdom56 Constructive Critique Points
5 Mar 2012 - 3:55 PM

Cracking good photograph Saili. Very well lit, good relaxed pose and well framed. I like the soft focus too. Really good. Keep up the good work.

James

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KarenFB
KarenFB Junior Gallery Team 84271 forum postsKarenFB vcard England163 Constructive Critique Points
5 Mar 2012 - 4:07 PM

A gorgeous capture - I love her smile (she is totally relaxed and happy to be photographed). You've caught her beautifully, the lighting is good and I like the background.

As you have allowed modifications I've had a little play. I slightly adjusted the colours and cropped off both left and right (making a portrait format). Then I gently used the 'blur' tool on her face (to smooth the skin a little) and adjusted the contrast (boosting the mid tones and toning down the highlights). After I resized it for upload, I gave it a slight sharpen. All small tweaks, but I'm hoping I've improved the image for you! Smile

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Sooty_1 Critique Team 41202 forum posts United Kingdom198 Constructive Critique Points
5 Mar 2012 - 6:50 PM

Nice pose and capture. There is enough info in the shot to adjust it several ways, and my mods are another interpretation. Just cropped to a square, smoothed the skin and adjusted contrast.

Simplicity is the key in shots like this, and this is well executed.

Nick

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jamestheboy
5 Mar 2012 - 8:22 PM

Great looking photo









james Smile

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