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another from my attemps at portrait photoghraphy with my daughter
comments welcome as im new to portrait photos
| Camera: | DMC-FZ18 panasonic LUMIX |
| Lens: | LEICA |
| Title: | portrait |
| Username: | 
tony147 |
| Uploaded: | 1 May 2009 - 12:43 PM |
| Tags: | Portraits / people |
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I really like the tone and light of this, but two things caught my attention -
She's not looking to the camera (not always a rule to be followed slavishly, of course, but I think it might have worked here) and also, I think this would have been much stronger if she'd not stood in front of that black corner of the wall.
The wall itself with the cracked paint looks like a fantastic background, and could have been better used.
Hi Tony,
Interesting Shot, looks lite i had 2 light sources but not flash.
The things i notice are the shadows on her left and right, they seem too harsh, the black corner shadow above her head also loses her hair definition. Maybe a blip of fill in flash have lost the shadows and made her face stand out from the wall a bit.
thanks, i hadnt noticed the background with the black line and it did have two main light sources.
i was focusing on the face to much to notice the rest of the shot .
i`ll take that into account next time i get to drag my daughter out for a portrait shoot.
i need all the help i cant get with portraits so thanks again
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