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Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Title:QEII Penang
Username:chrrab chrrab
Uploaded:11 Jul 2011 - 9:38 PM
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banehawi
banehawi Critique Team 10777 forum postsbanehawi vcard Canada2779 Constructive Critique Points
12 Jul 2011 - 1:44 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

Youve provided no information on the shot settigs, lens, camera, so theres not a lot of valuable critique to be given.

As it looks, its underexposed, likely due to the bright sky behind; theres a little barrel distortion that makes the right side of the building appear crooked; it can be a little sharper.


I have loaded a mod with these elements corrected for comparison.




regards


Willie

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ItsMeJustG
12 Jul 2011 - 3:30 AMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

From a composition point of view it looks like a difficult place to shoot. The surroundings are very busy with quite a few distractions. The building itself is quite an interesting shape and has some good contrasting tones. The sky looks good and would make a good backdrop to the shot if you could have re-positioned to isolate the building a little more, maybe also making use of reflections in the water in front of it.
This is only my personal view, not meant as any offence. I hope you find it helpful.

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chrrab
chrrab  3 United Kingdom
12 Jul 2011 - 8:45 PM

Thanks for the advice the sea is really dirty so there was no reflection but thanks for input

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