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pamelajean (Critique Team)

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16 Dec 2012 - 3:57 PM

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I like it, too, Den. It suggests that a child has played with the bricks and then abandoned them.
The combination of different colours, aspects, spacing and shadows works well.
But I feel they are a bit too spread out.
Further suggestions:-
Look at the whole, then choose a small section of the random group to photograph, i.e. have less in the frame.
Alternativbely, use less bricks.
Try having them closer together, overlapping, or touching, even a little random "stack". If you are tempted to move any, just move one away from the rest, so that it looks as if it has fallen from the stack.
This should enable you to have space all around them, with none too close to any frame edge.
Make several attempts at "casting" them and look for a grouping with as many different aspects as possible, rather than one area where they are all upside-down, for instance, as in the centre of this group.
Keep having fun.
Pamela.

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